Wednesday, September 25, 2013

Comments that were presented for possibly future edits (Assignment #3)

Olivia:
Interesting post, Ruth! I liked what you had to say. I just really think that GIF's to the side are really too big and a bit distracting.

Jack:  (...)

David: 
I want you to become a fashion designer.

Bell: (...)

Shelby:
Ruth I duly believe that you should pursue your dreams! And I agree with your blog whole heartedly! If you become a fashion designer, you never know where God will lead you, make sure you design a beautiful flowing gown with skulls on it for me! Just kidding but in all serious I think you have the potential.

Liam: (...)

Samantha:
Good for you. You have every right to be who you want to be and don’t let anyone ever tell you otherwise.

Jordan:
I agree with you and your post. Your premise that people shouldn’t be judged based on the things they can’t change is correct. Yet it is important to know that some things are limited to some people for a reason. Say if a Nazi wanted to be president of the United States, I believe it would be detrimental to allow them and in this case, discrimination should be enacted.

Josh: I understand what you are trying to say about opportunity and being yourself; however, this is a dangerous idea, and ideas have consequences. If taken to its extreme, and all ideas eventually are, this idea can be very harmful. It is great that you acknowledged that. I also agree that we shouldn't judge people, and that we should give them equal opportunities. There are a few minor spelling/ grammatical errors.

Kacie:
I agree that people shouldn’t be restricted to do things because of physical characteristics. this post was very well written and you did a good job of making the post personal to you.

Jonathan:
I would say to break up the points in your blog so it is easier to read.

John:
I think that's great everyone can do what they wish to do, as long as it don't trouble others.

Allan: (...)

Bobbie: 
I totally agree with you. God made us all different, so we should use our gifts that he has given us! I will be rooting for you when you are in the fashion business :)












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